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Comparing my edits with yours really made me think about how I approach fiction editing in general and has given me a toolkit for fixing stuff that isn&#8217;t working.</p>\n"}}]},{"module":"WordPressAcf_additional_content","title":null,"body":"<h3>How the course works</h3>\n<p>This is a self-study eight-module online course.</p>\n<p>The written materials will be available immediately through a dedicated online portal where you can work through the modules at your own pace, starting whenever you like.</p>\n<p>You&#8217;ll also be able to download PDF versions of the modules to save, print and keep.</p>\n<p>There are several extensive editing exercises for you to complete (model answers provided), and a few additional resources.</p>\n<p>You&#8217;ll receive a certificate upon completion.</p>\n","no_background":null},{"module":"WordPressAcf_text_image_aside","image":{"localFile":{"childImageSharp":{"sizes":{"base64":"data:image/jpeg;base64,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","aspectRatio":1,"src":"/static/8cccfe2fbb2ab2bbba977eb6be6ab7f6/f422e/sophie-playle.jpg","srcSet":"/static/8cccfe2fbb2ab2bbba977eb6be6ab7f6/e75b5/sophie-playle.jpg 160w,\n/static/8cccfe2fbb2ab2bbba977eb6be6ab7f6/c01e2/sophie-playle.jpg 320w,\n/static/8cccfe2fbb2ab2bbba977eb6be6ab7f6/f422e/sophie-playle.jpg 640w,\n/static/8cccfe2fbb2ab2bbba977eb6be6ab7f6/a6352/sophie-playle.jpg 960w,\n/static/8cccfe2fbb2ab2bbba977eb6be6ab7f6/ec6c5/sophie-playle.jpg 1280w,\n/static/8cccfe2fbb2ab2bbba977eb6be6ab7f6/2c1bb/sophie-playle.jpg 1281w","sizes":"(max-width: 640px) 100vw, 640px"}}}},"title":"Who am I to teach line and copy-editing?","body":"<p>I ran my own freelance editing practice for over a decade, specialising in line and copy-editing fiction. 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You can include this in your training credentials!</p>\n<p data-start=\"0\" data-end=\"301\">In the editing industry, training is recognised based on the provider’s credibility. My courses, for example, are recognised by the Chartered Institute for Editing and Proofreading and count towards membership upgrades.</p>\n<p data-start=\"303\" data-end=\"571\" data-is-last-node=\"\" data-is-only-node=\"\"><em>Certification</em>, however, is different. It requires an assessment to meet a certifying body’s standards, and there are ongoing requirements to maintain it. It’s quite complex, and rare in the editing industry. Liminal Pages does not offer certification.</p>\n</div>\n</div>\n"},{"question":"Do I really need Microsoft Word? Can't I use another word processor?","answer":"<p>Sorry, but Microsoft Word is the industry standard – so you will need to invest in this if you want to become an editor. It has all the bells and whistles you need to do the job.</p>\n<p>And sadly, you can&#8217;t use the free online version as it doesn&#8217;t support Track Changes or macros, and you can&#8217;t add or customise your own styles. (You need these things to be a professional editor!)</p>\n"},{"question":"How much time will this course require?","answer":"<p>Around 1-2 hours per module is about standard (the latter end if you dedicate yourself to the exercises), so roughly 8-16 hours for the whole course. Think about it like a dedicated weekend of training.</p>\n"},{"question":"Do I need to take 'Tea and Commas: The Foundations of Line and Copy-Editing' first?","answer":"<p class=\"font-claude-response-body break-words whitespace-normal leading-[1.7]\">I believe line and copy-editing go hand in hand, and you&#8217;ll be in the strongest position to build a professional editing career by taking both courses. Understanding the technical side of copy-editing (marking up for the typesetter, using Track Changes, creating a style sheet, knowing your legal responsibilities) gives you an important foundation on which to build your line editing skills.</p>\n<p class=\"font-claude-response-body break-words whitespace-normal leading-[1.7]\">That said, if you&#8217;re already an experienced copy-editor, or you&#8217;re only interested in the more creative side of sentence-level editing, you may be just fine starting here. And you can always go back and take <a href=\"/courses/tea-and-commas/\">Tea and Commas</a> later!</p>\n"},{"question":"Do I have to be from the UK to benefit from this course?","answer":"<p>No. Though there are some stylistic and language variations between English-speaking countries, we’ll touch on this. Mostly, the principles are universal to good writing.</p>\n<p>Also: a note on international pricing.</p>\n<p class=\"font-claude-response-body break-words whitespace-normal leading-[1.7]\">Liminal Pages courses are priced in pounds sterling, which can make them feel significantly more expensive depending on where you&#8217;re based and the current exchange rate. If you&#8217;re outside the UK and the price feels genuinely out of reach, drop me an email at sophie@liminalpages.com and I&#8217;ll sort out a discount code for you.</p>\n"},{"question":"Is this course suitable for me?","answer":"<p>You&#8217;ll be the best judge of this, so take a close look at all the information provided on this web page and have a think! If there&#8217;s something you&#8217;d like to know to help you make your decision and I haven&#8217;t mentioned it on this page, feel free to <a href=\"mailto:sophie@liminalpages.com\">drop me an email</a> and I&#8217;ll do my best to help.</p>\n"},{"question":"What do I need to know before taking this course?","answer":"<p>Not much – but there are two things that will help you hit the ground running: a working knowledge of Track Changes and comments in Word, and an understanding of what a style sheet is and how to use one. If you&#8217;re not there yet, <a href=\"/courses/tea-and-commas/\">Tea and Commas</a> is a great place to start.</p>\n"}]},{"module":"WordPressAcf_additional_content","title":null,"body":"<h3 style=\"text-align: center;\">Interested in the companion course, Tea and Commas: The Foundations of Line and Copy-Editing Fiction? <a href=\"http://liminalpages.teachable.com/p/line-and-copy-editing-bundle\"><u>Buy both together</u></a> and save a whopping 20% on both courses.</h3>\n","no_background":null},{"module":"WordPressAcf_on_sale_form","on_sale_form":[{"wordpress_id":1890,"acf":{"title":"Buy now for £379","cta_button_text":"I'm ready","background_image":{"localFile":{"childImageSharp":{"sizes":{"base64":"data:image/jpeg;base64,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","aspectRatio":2.318840579710145,"src":"/static/b76cc21cefb4fb015b2f6d4c7ed2f314/f422e/editing-courses-off-sale-form-background.jpg","srcSet":"/static/b76cc21cefb4fb015b2f6d4c7ed2f314/e75b5/editing-courses-off-sale-form-background.jpg 160w,\n/static/b76cc21cefb4fb015b2f6d4c7ed2f314/c01e2/editing-courses-off-sale-form-background.jpg 320w,\n/static/b76cc21cefb4fb015b2f6d4c7ed2f314/f422e/editing-courses-off-sale-form-background.jpg 640w,\n/static/b76cc21cefb4fb015b2f6d4c7ed2f314/a6352/editing-courses-off-sale-form-background.jpg 960w,\n/static/b76cc21cefb4fb015b2f6d4c7ed2f314/ec6c5/editing-courses-off-sale-form-background.jpg 1280w,\n/static/b76cc21cefb4fb015b2f6d4c7ed2f314/af56c/editing-courses-off-sale-form-background.jpg 2880w","sizes":"(max-width: 640px) 100vw, 640px"}}}},"purchase_url":"https://liminalpages.teachable.com/purchase?product_id=6677905"}}]},{"module":"WordPressAcf_additional_content","title":null,"body":"<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>A note on international pricing:</strong></p>\n<p class=\"font-claude-response-body break-words whitespace-normal leading-[1.7]\" style=\"text-align: center;\">Liminal Pages courses are priced in pounds sterling, which can make them feel significantly more expensive depending on where you&#8217;re based and the current exchange rate. If you&#8217;re outside the UK and the price feels genuinely out of reach, drop me an email at <a href=\"mailto:sophie@liminalpages.com\">sophie@liminalpages.com</a> and I&#8217;ll sort out a discount code for you.</p>\n","no_background":true}]}}},"pageContext":{"id":1887}},"staticQueryHashes":["1904826805","930678125"]}